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PostSubject: English writing and speaking?   Wed Sep 24, 2008 8:45 pm

Apa yg membezakan mereka?
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Wed Sep 24, 2008 10:50 pm

Student Composition:

Three Passions I Live For

1 Looking back on my past twenty years full of passions and enthusiasm, I feel grateful and to live a healthy and happy life. There are a lot of qualities I have learnt from ordinary life that guided me through. If I am asked to list the first three, I will put health, happiness of my family and enough financial support as the passions I live for.

2.Health comes first for me. Without health, everything is meaningless. It is indispensable to everyone . Only when one is healthy can he start his own career, set up his own family and achieve any accomplishment . I always value health and regard it as the preliminary step to possess a happy family and earn enough money.

3.Happiness of my family is very important to me because I love my family wholeheartedly. I get pleasure in their joys and suffer what they suffer. Their infinite love and support motivate me to overcome any trouble or obstacle I may meet. To make those I love happy is the biggest wish for me. What would millions of money mean to me if I saw my family suffer from pain and agony ? Now that Iíve got a healthy body, I have plenty of time and opportunities to entertain my family. Then money comes third.

4.Everyone must admit that they could never do without money. Money enables us to get food, a house for shelter, clothes to wear and furthermore enjoyment. For example, with money, we can get a good education, travel around the world and receive fine medical treatment. Money is essential to satisfy our basic needs as well as further self-development.

5.As long as I am healthy, Iíll work hard to earn as much money as I can, then with it I buy substances or services to make my family live more comfortably. If everything goes on smoothly, Iíll be absolutely the happiest girl in the world!

Ps: Siapa boleh trace error ddidalam karangan ini?
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Wed Sep 24, 2008 11:08 pm

Yup!.. i saw the error!

"Passion" is normally a non-count noun, especially in this expression, "full of passion". In any case, the word "passion" itself is not really appropriate considering the three ideas being expressed. Health and wealth are mentioned as necessities which add to the writer's quality of life, but they are not really "passions". If the writer loved to go the gym every single day of the week and practiced yoga, weight training, along with various other sports, then it might be called "a passion". "Wealth" is also "a passion" for some people who really do seem to live for money. They want all the money they can get - more, more, MORE! That's passion. This writer doesn't live for money, however, she only uses money to help her live a better life. For her, money is a tool, not a passion.

Ps: English Education kah ini?
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Thu Sep 25, 2008 12:56 am

uinaaaaa, buli tahan kaoni gamans......
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Thu Sep 25, 2008 6:47 pm

Muahahahaaa...
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Thu Sep 25, 2008 7:17 pm

mana sudah cikgu2 di ISLF ini? Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Thu Sep 25, 2008 8:18 pm

bah apa lagi sigu orud? ko jadi pensyarah online sini ILSF he he
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Thu Sep 25, 2008 8:22 pm

jangan kasih belakang sama itu sigu pukutarap, sigu belalang dan sigu Monkey..
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Thu Sep 25, 2008 8:59 pm

aduinaaaa, inda abis2 kaoni gaman, sia anulah, itulah, inilah, sigulah..... si balalang, eh si bb barulah sigu.....
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Thu Sep 25, 2008 9:48 pm

hehe..jgn marah bah gaman..kita main2 saja itu.
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Thu Sep 25, 2008 9:50 pm

inda bah gaman, hihihiii.....
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Thu Sep 25, 2008 9:53 pm

Bah gaman, bagi komen sikit di essay atas itu..
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Thu Sep 25, 2008 10:04 pm

aduinaaaa, inda bah sia pandai bg kumin ni gaman.... bah mana si bb ni, tulung bg kumin sikit.....
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Fri Sep 26, 2008 10:13 am

sya pun surrender dlu la ni kali. tingu apa komen sigu2 yg lain. hehe...
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Fri Sep 26, 2008 4:13 pm

Quote :
bah mana si bb ni, tulung bg kumin sikit....

Ni gaman kan suka bah main surung surung..bikin panas ni...sa bukan sigu laa..sa loyar buruk sikit, 'turus' kena 'gam' kunu sigu....adeeiiii...mataaiii...
sa teda kelulusan apa2 ni...SAP jak..Sijil Angkat Penyapu..tukang sapu terhormat bah sa ni..tahun depan pencen suda sia ni...Ini pengakuan berani pasal peribadi dan pekerjaan sa...jadik..sa harap tuan pukutarap jangan la bah panggil sa sigu kio..
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Fri Sep 26, 2008 4:54 pm

aduinaaaa sigu.... berubah lagi karaja, dulu bilang parampuan simpanan, sikarang tukan sapu sdh..... sapat oo kao tukar karaja..... hihihihiiiiii.....
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Fri Sep 26, 2008 10:46 pm

alpha.wave wrote:
Student Composition:

Three Passions I Live For

1 Looking back on my past twenty years full of passions and enthusiasm, I feel grateful and to live a healthy and happy life. There are a lot of qualities I have learnt from ordinary life that guided me through. If I am asked to list the first three, I will put health, happiness of my family and enough financial support as the passions I live for.

2.Health comes first for me. Without health, everything is meaningless. It is indispensable to everyone . Only when one is healthy can he start his own career, set up his own family and achieve any accomplishment . I always value health and regard it as the preliminary step to possess a happy family and earn enough money.

3.Happiness of my family is very important to me because I love my family wholeheartedly. I get pleasure in their joys and suffer what they suffer. Their infinite love and support motivate me to overcome any trouble or obstacle I may meet. To make those I love happy is the biggest wish for me. What would millions of money mean to me if I saw my family suffer from pain and agony ? Now that Iíve got a healthy body, I have plenty of time and opportunities to entertain my family. Then money comes third.

4.Everyone must admit that they could never do without money. Money enables us to get food, a house for shelter, clothes to wear and furthermore enjoyment. For example, with money, we can get a good education, travel around the world and receive fine medical treatment. Money is essential to satisfy our basic needs as well as further self-development.

5.As long as I am healthy, Iíll work hard to earn as much money as I can, then with it I buy substances or services to make my family live more comfortably. If everything goes on smoothly, Iíll be absolutely the happiest girl in the world!

Ps: Siapa boleh trace error ddidalam karangan ini?

its me again to answer bah..

OK. The word "and" was added by mistake. I think the writer wanted to write something like "I feel grateful for the chance to have lived a healthy and happy life". If the writer wants to keep "and", then a sentence such as "I feel grateful and happy to have lived a healthy life". "And" should connect two similar words or ideas.
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Fri Sep 26, 2008 10:47 pm

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aduinaaaa sigu.... berubah lagi karaja, dulu bilang parampuan simpanan, sikarang tukan sapu sdh..... sapat oo kao tukar karaja..... hihihihiiiiii.....

sudah barubah kah gamans? aduii sudah nda bulih order dia lagi lah!
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Fri Sep 26, 2008 10:49 pm

uinaaaa, kan gamang, patutlah sia tesium bau2 kaoni sigu...... ramai sdh sigu begini, sigu balalang/monkey, sigu orud, sigu bighorn, sigu..... siapa lg tu?
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Fri Sep 26, 2008 10:50 pm

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aduinaaaa sigu.... berubah lagi karaja, dulu bilang parampuan simpanan, sikarang tukan sapu sdh..... sapat oo kao tukar karaja..... hihihihiiiiii.....

sudah barubah kah gamans? aduii sudah nda bulih order dia lagi lah!
ya, inda buli order sdh, sdh mo pinsin juga..... hihihihiiiii......
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Fri Sep 26, 2008 11:41 pm

pukutarap wrote:
uinaaaa, kan gamang, patutlah sia tesium bau2 kaoni sigu...... ramai sdh sigu begini, sigu balalang/monkey, sigu orud, sigu bighorn, sigu..... siapa lg tu?
siapa lagi? oohh baru sy ingat..sigu pukutarap..hihihi.
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Fri Sep 26, 2008 11:42 pm

pukutarap wrote:
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aduinaaaa sigu.... berubah lagi karaja, dulu bilang parampuan simpanan, sikarang tukan sapu sdh..... sapat oo kao tukar karaja..... hihihihiiiiii.....

sudah barubah kah gamans? aduii sudah nda bulih order dia lagi lah!
ya, inda buli order sdh, sdh mo pinsin juga..... hihihihiiiii......

peduli laa..mo hidup mesti kena ada kemahiran....kemahiran tu kita belajar sendiri..teda kena ajar di sikulah...sa cakap sa tukang sapu...kamu tau apa sa sapu? Nahh...
Kalau sa perempuan simpanan pun, inda sa mo terima peng'order'an kamu nie...pasal kamu urang baik baik..Ayat saja yg mantapss...cheeah..

Apa saja kerja asal mendatangkan 'fulus'..jangan saja sa jadi tali barut negara, mnjual rahsia negara...fuuuhh..
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Fri Sep 26, 2008 11:48 pm

hibat, hibat, mimang hibat sakapan sigu, inda talawan sia...... 'bernes' dan mantapssssss....... hihihihihi pinjam sikijap.....
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Sat Sep 27, 2008 12:00 am

pukutarap wrote:
hibat, hibat, mimang hibat sakapan sigu, inda talawan sia...... 'bernes' dan mantapssssss....... hihihihihi pinjam sikijap.....


salahhh..bukan sigu..ingat sa punya line ni...

"sa bukan sigu...sa tukang sapu"
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PostSubject: Re: English writing and speaking?   Sat Sep 27, 2008 12:08 am

baiklah sigu.... eh eh eh tasakap pula lg...... hihihihiiiiii.....
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